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21W.750

Experimental Writing

Nick Montfort

Wednesdays 2pm-5pm, 66-156

Students use innovative compositional techniques to write extraordinary texts, focusing on new writing methods rather than on traditional lyrical or narrative concerns. Writing experiments, conducted individually, collaboratively and during class meetings, culminate in chapbook-sized projects. Students read, listen to, and create different types of work, including sound poetry, cut-ups, constrained and Oulipian writing, uncreative writing, sticker literature, false translations, artists’ books, and digital projects.

Typical Class Meeting - Assessment - Schedule - Further Info

Syllabus

Typical Class Meeting

This is a creative writing workshop course. Although the schedule will vary somewhat from class to class, a typical meeting will involve the following:

0) Participants will do assigned reading and writing in preparation for class.

1) At the beginning of our class meeting, at 2pm, one or more published/disseminated pieces (“other people’s experimental writing”) will be read aloud or otherwise presented by a workshop participant. These readings will typically be from the list of assigned pieces.

2) We will react, discuss the pieces we have heard, discover and admire particular techniques that were evidently used in their composition, and wonder aloud about how these techniques can be extended and used in other ways. (This is “theoretical writing” rather than “experimental writing,” but it’s done in support of experimental writing undertaken during the class.)

3) We will extend our discussion to cover the assigned reading. How does it change the way we read? Challenge conventional notions of writing? Make us rethink forms, English, and the subjects and themes of the piece? Would it make us think differently if we wrote in this way? During this time, the instructor may give a short presentation about the historical, political, and cultural context in which the texts we have discussed were written. Note, however, that such a presentation will be left for after we have had a chance to give an immediate reaction and to let the writing provoke us in our own context today.

4) Around 3:15pm we will take an eight-minute break.

5) When we reconvene, we will begin with a short in-class writing exercise inspired by the techniques of particular people, literary groups, or movements. We will share what we wrote with each other.

6) We will discuss the exercise - not just the outcomes of it, but also the structure and setup of the activity itself, and how that facilitated or inhibited new types of writing.

7) Discussion of work from class participants: One or more people will read their work aloud or otherwise present it to the group. We will pretend that the work offered to us in this way is our own writing, and that the the underlying goals and purposes are our goals and purposes, and we will sincerely try to determine how to revise, reimagine, reconceptualize, add to, or cut the text to better accomplish these purposes. We will not ask (or allow) the writer to interpret or explain what is being expressed in his or her text. Our discussion will be undertaken with complete respect for the writer, the text, and the purposes behind the writing of it, and will not resort to either euphemism or brutality.

8) Initially, specific short writing assignments will be given that will be due the following week. Later in the semester, participants will develop concepts for and do weekly work on their main projects. The parameters of these projects are to be determined by the participants themselves.

Nick’s office hours (and “reading room” hours at his lab, The Trope Tank, 14N-233) will typically follow class, 5pm-6pm Wednesdays. He is also available throughout the week many times to meet in person and many times to chat by appointment on IM (screen name coachmontfort). Additionally, students seeking to access books or other resources at the Trope Tank can do so when Nick or any other researcher is there, by appointment.

Assessment

30% - Preparation for and participation in class. This includes the physical presence of your material form in the classroom; reading aloud or otherwise presenting the experimental writing you have done and that done by others; engaging in discussion that is informed by having completed the assigned reading; and doing writing during our in-class writing exercises.

10% - Attending one event, exhibit, reading, etc. related to experimental writing and documenting this in an email to the instructor. Details will follow, but I plan that some events and exhibits at MIT will qualify, as will others in the Boston area.

20% - Completion of the short writing assignments in a way that shows an understanding of the constraint, prompt, or concept and which works toward some innovation. Each of the assignments will be valued equally.

40% - The main project. The framework for the project (form, concept, material) should be innovative and appropriate to the author’s goals. The scope should be suitable for a project that is the culmination of a semester of writing work. The writing should be innovative. Some aspect of the project should be awesome.

The lists of books, sound pieces, digital works, and shorter texts are provided to give a sense of what we will read and experience in the course. We will probably not cover all of these; we will almost certainly cover several books not on the list.

Required Books

Woman’s World
Grahame Rawle
2005 (UK edition) / 2008-2009 (US editions)

Eunoia
Christian Bök
2001 (1st edition) / 2009 (new edition with additional poems)

Other Books

Some of these books are out of print or have been printed in limited editions. They will be made available in other ways. For instance, they will be shown and handed around in class. As many as possible are in the collection of the MIT Libraries. They may also be made available for you to read in my office during office hours or by appointment.

Most of these are not books are to be read completely. We will consider others in different ways, perhaps requiring different sorts of reading strategies that involve understanding a framework or concept, experiencing some of the texture of the work, but not always reading the text cover to cover.

Watt
Samuel Beckett
1953

Cent mille milliards de poémes [Hundred Thousand Billion Poems]
Raymond Queneau
1961

Alphabetical Africa
Walter Abish
1974

Sentences
Charles O. Hartman and Hugh Kenner
1995

Worldview
Emma Kay
1999

Day
Kenneth Goldsmith
2003

Not So Too Much of Much of Everything
NaoKo TakaHashi
2007

Flowers of Bad
David Cameron
2007

Parse
Craig Dworkin
2008

Sound

Karawane
Hugo Ball
1916

Ursonate
Kurt Schwitters
1922-1932

Bombardamento di Adrianopoli [Bombardment of Adrianopolis]
Filippo Tommaso Marinetti
1926

Mayakovsky
The Four Horsemen
1977

Ambient Fish
Caroline Bergvall
1998

What the President Will Say and Do
Jaap Blonk
2006

Digital

NIO
Jim Andrews
2001

The Cape
J. R. Carpenter
2005

Kludge: A Meditation
Brian Kim Stefans
2006

Status Update
Darren Wershler and Bill Kennedy
2009

Shorter Texts

Jabberwocky
Lewis Carroll
1872

Doctor Faustus Lights the Lights
Gertrude Stein
1938

From Finnegans Wake (pages 1 and 2)
James Joyce
1939

Continuidad de los parques [Continuity of Parks]
Julio Cortázar
1956

Carnival: the First Panel
Steve McCaffrey
1967-1970

[Slogans]
The Situationist International
1968 and surrounding years

From Selected Declarations of Dependence (selected perverbs)
Harry Mathews
1977

Truisms
Jenny Holzer
1977-

Via (48 Dante variations)
Caroline Bergvall
2000

2002: A Palindrome Story
Nick Montfort and William Gillespie
2001

From Drawn Inward (part I, palindrome poems)
Mike Maguire
2003 / New Edition 2016

From Implementation
Nick Montfort and Scott Rettberg
2004

Tentative Schedule with Themes

  1. September 7: Introduction
  2. September 14: ’Pataphysics, Futurism, Dada
  3. September 21: Surrealism, Cut-Ups, Games
  4. September 28: The Oulipo
  5. October 5: Constraints, Eunoia
  6. October 12: Conceptual Writing
  7. October 19: Computer-Generated Books
  8. October 26: The Experimental Novel, Woman's World
  9. November 2: Guest (Christian Bök), Concrete and Visual Poetry
    (Note: Nov 1 public lecture, Nov 3 public reading by Bök are being planned)
  10. November 9: Erasure
  11. November 16: Serial Digital Texts
    (Note: No class on November 23)
  12. November 30: The Material Text
  13. December 7: Final Project Workshop
  14. December 14: Final Presentations

1. September 9 - Introduction, short texts from different periods, discussion of class format

Optional reading related to the beginning of class: A review of All Work and No Play..., a video about “hidden text” in the film, and a discussion of the translations of this text.

Writing assignments due September 14: (1) Write a good sentence of exactly 100 words. (2) Choose a writing process, constraint, or form inspired by one of the readings I presented and, using it, write something of no more than one page. Use a different process/constraint/form that we used in class for writing exercises. (3) Choose another writing process, constraint, or form (again, one you have not yet used) inspired by one of the readings and, using it, write something of no more than one page. (4) Revise your in-class writing exercise (the t-word exercise) from the first class.

Readings for September 14: Official-looking page of the Collège de ’Pataphysique, The Futurist Manifesto (F. T. Marinetti), The DADA Manifesto (Tristan Tzara).

2. September 16 - ’Pataphysics, Futurism, and Dada

A snippet of Averty’s 1965 film Ubu Roi.

Readings for September 21: The Cut-Up Method of Brion Gysin (William Burroughs).

Writing assignments due September 21: (1) Cut up three printed texts into three piles of snippets. (2) Assemble three poems (or other short texts), each one using snippets from a different pile, and scan or photograph them. (3) Replace the snippets, choose two piles to combine, draw a poem from that combined pile, and scan or photograph it. Print the results; you have four poems to turn in. (4) Create a digital cut-up using only a computer and its text manipulation capabilities. You will need to decide how to “cut.”

3. September 21 - Surrealism, Cut-Ups, Games

Relevant to digital cut-ups: Edde Addad’s charNG and “Alice’s Adventures in the Whale,” generated by Leonard Richardson for National Novel Generation Month.

Writing assignments due September 28: (1) Play several rounds of Question & Answer with friends. Bring what you believe to be the best results (at least 3) to class. (2) Invent a reasonably simple writing game similar to Exquisite Corpse, Question & Answer, and Syllogism. (3) Try this one out with friends as well and bring the best results. Also, a short critical/historical assignment: (4) Why is there FuturISM ... SurrealISM ... sometimes DadaISM ... but just ... 'Patahpysics (not 'Pataphysicism) ... The Oulipo (not Oulipism) ... and only sometimes Dadaism (mostly just Dada)? Inform yourself a bit more about these movements with some research - we have touched on them all with readings up to the current readings, and have had class discussion of almost all of them - and write or type a short answer (no more than 250 words!) to hand in on paper.

Readings for September 28: Selections from the Oulipo. Note that you are not required to read all of Queneau’s sonnets, since it cannot be done within a lifetime; also, look through all of Eunoia and read the first page of chapters A, E, I, O, and U closely. Bring your copy of Eunoia to class next time!

4. September 28 - The Oulipo

Writing assignments due October 5: (1) Bring an unusual, innovative text to class that fascinates you (something “experimental,” 1 page, copies for everyone in class) (2) Bring a short text or meaningful excerpt from a text that you love (does not have to be “experimental,” 1 page, copies for everyone in class) (3) Do a univocalic “translation” of a short text. (4) Write a 20-consonant poem (just going through the consonants once). You may revised the one you drafted in class. (5) Go to extremes; specifically, rework a previous assignment or idea, from in class or between classes, while changing one aspect of it to be the opposite (according to you) of what it was.

Readings for October 5: All of Eunoia, including the poems beyond the five main chapters. Complete a reading of book that allows you to appreciate the sounds, themes, subjects, and lexicon. You should understand what the text means and how it is organized and of coruse the basic compositional principles. Your focus, and the focus of our discussion, will be the title poem. Bring your copy of Eunoia to class next time!

6. October 5: Constraints, Eunoia

Table of Forms, by William Gillespie. As a backup, a link to an (Internet Archive) copy of Table of Forms.

Writing assignments due October 12: (1) Write an email to a fellow student about that student's work in class, cc:ing me if it's not to the list. (2) Write something in a form of your choosing from Table of Forms (3) Select any previous writing of yours for this class and revise it at the level of process, form, or constraint. That is, choose a different writing framework or overall technique and rewrite using that. (4) Select any previous writing of yours for this class and revise it without changing process, form, constraint. You can change anything else. (5) Fire a probe. (That is, begin an experiment or exploration by actually doing some writing.) In a single page, explore some process, constraint, etc. you may use in your final project.

Readings for October 12: William Gillespie's Table of Forms. (I don’t expect you to read the whole book/site, but you should study it and understand how several different sorts of forms are used in composing poems.) Excerpt from Craig Dworkin's Legion.

6. October 12: Conceptual Writing

Writing assignments due October 19: (1) Write in another form of your choosing from Table of Forms (2) Write in yet another form of your choosing from Table of Forms (3) Develop your own form (one that can concisely stated and quickly understood) and write a piece of about a page in that form (4) Read a computer-generated book (in whatever way that “reading” satisfies you), write a short description (no more than 500 words) of how you beleive it was generated, and be ready to give a brief presentation on this book in class.

7. October 19: Computer-Generated Books

Readings for October 26: All of Woman's World. I encourage you to make notes about passages that you find interesting and worth discussing, either by marking your book or, if you cannot bear to do this or are using a library copy, using pieces of paper. Bring your copy of Woman's World to class next time!

Writing assignments due October 26: (1) Create a conceptual and/or computer-generated chapbook of at least 16 pages. That means producing the text and designing and printing a chapbook. (2) Also, Complete a second “probe” — another one-page exploration of what may become your final project. This one can be along very similar lines as your first probe, if you were very pleased with the result, or it can be completely different.

8. October 26: The Experimental Novel, Woman’s World

Writing assignment due November 2: Bring some writing toward your main project -- no more than a page; one copy is fine, although we may share and discuss such work. Choose one of “the hard parts” if the project you are imagining has sections that you can discern as more difficult to complete than others.

Readings for November 2: Poems by Augusto de Campos, available as image files and PDFs at http://www.ubu.com/historical/decampos_a/index.html. Three untitled poems by Haroldo de Campos, linked from the top of http://www.ubu.com/historical/decampos_h/index.html. Carnival, first panel, by Steve McCaffrey, http://archives.chbooks.com/online_books/carnival/1.html.

9. November 2: Guest (Christian Bök), Concrete and Visual Poetry

Examined & discussed in depth in class:

Readings for November 9: “The Aesthetics of Erasure,” The Deletionist.

Writing assignment due November 9: Bring some writing toward your main project -- no more than a page; one copy is fine, although we may share and discuss such work. Choose one of “the hard parts” if the project you are imagining has sections that you can discern as more difficult to complete than others.

10. November 9: Erasure

Selected books written by erasure:

Writing assignment due November 16: Send me an email briefly proposing the material format for your final project. Also, bring some writing toward your main project -- no more than a page; one copy is fine, although we may share and discuss such work. Choose one of “the hard parts” if the project you are imagining has sections that you can discern as more difficult to complete than others.

11. November 16: Serial Digital Texts

Viewed today in class: Dakota and other works can be found at Y0UNG-HAE CHANG HEAVY INDUSTRIES. Jörg Piringer's Unicode. Star Wars, One Letter at a Time by Brian Kim Stefans and I, You, We by Dan Waber are in the Electronic Literature Collection, Volume 1.

Writing assignment due November 30: Bring a draft of your main project -- it’s okay if sections are missing, but the framework should be there and the project should be largely complete. Also, bring any questions that you have for the class about how to complete the project. Finally, create a Web page (uploading it to your MIT space) that has a draft description of your project.

No assigned reading for November 30.

11. November 30: The Material Text

In class: Ultra-short presentations on various unusual books (that are not art/literary projects).

Writing assignment due December 7: Have a draft of your main project and prepare the framework of a document for a description of it, so that prospective/future students can understand what you did, learn about what this class is like, and be informed by your work. You may quote from and/or photograph your project for this page.

No assigned reading for December 7.

12. December 7: Final Project Workshop

Writing assignment due December 14: Complete a draft of your project for discussion.

No assigned reading for December 7.

13. December 14: Final Presentations

The main project is due today before the start of class at 2:05pm. You are also assigned to update the Web page you turned in last week with the current description of your project and with either the entire text of the project or some documentation of it, whichever is appropriate for your project.

Further Information

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